The system used to for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. write a letter to the local council. in your letter describe hoew the rubbish collection system is not working properly. explian how his this is affecting you and your neighbours and suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My Name is
parth patel
and I'm Correct your spelling
Parth Patel
liveing
in the Correct your spelling
living
katargam
Change the capitalization
Katargam
area
from surat
. There are many Capitalize word
Surat
problem
Change to a plural noun
problems
due to
gurbage
, In Correct your spelling
garbage
this
letter I will Infrom to you that, rabbish vachicle
and their worker Correct your spelling
vehicle
vehicles
are
not collect garbage Verb problem
do
on
our Change preposition
in
area
our
neighbours are. Rephrase
where our
This
is a very big issue For this
garbage.
There are many Problem
Fix the agreement mistake
Problems
to
stying garbage in one place Change preposition
with
three
to four Change preposition
for three
day
. Many of them stink and spread many Fix the agreement mistake
days
diseasec
to the people Correct your spelling
diseases
disease
for
who came and Change preposition
apply
go
Because Wrong verb form
went
of
Change preposition
apply
their
are manyReplace the word
there
school
and Fix the agreement mistake
schools
supermakel
Correct your spelling
supermarkets
are
available in their Unnecessary verb
apply
area
.And many of school children go and pass area
anytime. Thsi
is a big issue Correct your spelling
This
from
our local Change preposition
for
resident
and people.
I propose Fix the agreement mistake
residents
you
how Change preposition
to you
this
problem can be sloved
in my local Correct your spelling
solved
area
and in my nearst
Correct your spelling
nearest
area
. First of all, you can mange
three to four refuse Correct your spelling
manage
crowed
Correct your spelling
crowded
channel
Fix the agreement mistake
channels
in
placed in Correct your spelling
is
Add an article
a resident
the resident
resident
of Replace the word
residence
poeple
and Correct your spelling
people
deferant
time. Increase the number of people and workers.
I hope you take some action and you remove Correct your spelling
different
this
waste as soon as possible.
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Parth Patel.Correct your spelling
Yours
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Task Achievement
Consider using formal language throughout your letter and avoid informal expressions and contractions (e.g., 'I'm liveing' should be 'I am living'). This will make your letter more appropriate for the context.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly. Introduce one main idea per paragraph and support it with details or examples. This will make your letter more coherent.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a range of linking words to connect your sentences and paragraphs more effectively. This will enhance the flow of your letter.
General
Check your spelling and grammar carefully. Errors can make your letter difficult to understand and detract from its overall quality.
