The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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information on the

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visitation

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during the year prior to and after

refurbishment

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, the below pie charts

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comparison

between the satisfaction score given by

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regarding the visit

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Ashdown

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Museum

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, it is readily apparent that

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poses

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positive correlation between the increased

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of visitors and content

tourists

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. Prior to the

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, a vast majority of

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, which is 55%, reviewed "dissatisfied" and "very dissatisfied" with the museum.

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, less than 45% were satisfied.

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, the

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of

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paying visits to Ashdown is solely 74000. Meanwhile, 5% of

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visitors

had no comments towards scoring satisfaction.

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, the visitation

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and satisfaction score after

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skyrocketed dramatically.

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with "no response"

maintainted

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maintained

the same percentage.

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three-fourths of

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are allocated to the satisfied category, the

propotion

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for satisfied and very satisfied increased to 40% and 35%, respectively. Relatively, it can be seen

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the

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of dissatisfied visitors witnessed a downward trend. Within 20% of

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tourists

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, the

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dissatisfied

ones

plummented

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plummeted

to 15%,

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a decline of 5% in the "very

disastified

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dissatisfied

" category. It is noteworthy to pinpoint that the

tourists

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feel more content with the museum after

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,

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the surge of visitors.