The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compararions where releavant.
The bar graph represents information about how families are spending their weekly salary between 1968 and 2018 in one region
As mentioned
from
the graph, there were eight different categories that most families use their money. The highest contribution in 1968 was for food Change preposition
in
while
the total amount of fuel and power was the least. Otherwise
, the biggest proportion of weekly income in 2018 was housing
and the lowest was for personal goods.
Change preposition
for housing
To begin
with, the total amount of food spending in 1968 was 35%; housing contributed of
10%; fuel and power Change preposition
apply
was
around 7% of Correct subject-verb agreement
were
families
weekly income. Change noun form
families'
family's
Furthermore
, clothing and footware
were placed on the second rank as the most popular items with total usage of 10%. The total amount of household and personal goods Correct your spelling
footwear
were
similar (around 8%)Change the verb form
was
,
Remove the comma
apply
while
spending on transport and recreation have differ
closely Wrong verb form
differed
around
2%
In 2018, the highest percentage was leisure with a total Change preposition
by around
more
than 20%; followed by Change preposition
of more
the
housing requirements (around 18%). The third Correct article usage
apply
places
was dedicated Fix the agreement mistake
place
for
food with spending above 15% of total weekly income. Other remaining categories, Change preposition
to
such
as for
fuel and power, clothing, household items, personal goods, and transport have Change preposition
apply
the
total proportion of 4%; 5%; 7%; 3%; and 14% respectively.Correct article usage
a
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