There are two different charts that illustrate the number of unemployed citizens in the US with average weekly earnings in 2005.
There are two different charts that illustrate the number of unemployed citizens in the US with average weekly earnings in 2005.
It can clearly be seen that a professional
degree
has the highest average weekly earnings and lowest unemployment
rate
in 2005 compared to other degrees
.
Regarding the professional degree
, it has the highest average weekly salary with 1800 dollars
in 2005. Other than that, it also
has the lowest unemployment
rate
with only 1.5% in 2005. The other degree
that has similar data is a doctoral degree
that has the exact same unemployment
rate
. However
, the average salary per week is just below the professional degree
which is 1740 dollars
. The other two degrees
that have similar percentages are master’s and bachelor’s degrees
. They both have a higher
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higher unemployment rates
a higher unemployment rate
unemployment
rates and almost reached 3% in 2005. The average wages
per week for both master’s degree
and bachelor’s degrees
, at 1560 and 1246 dollars
respectively.
In terms of the other three professional degrees
, they have similarities with the highest rate
of unemployment
and low average weekly wages
in 2005. Individuals that have no degree
but follow some college had a high unoccupied rate
at approximately 4.3% in 2005. It is also
proportional to low wages
at 701 dollars
on average salary per week. A high school diploma has a similar average weekly earnings at 701 dollars
but a higher unemployment
rate
at
approximately 5.5% compared to the previous Change preposition
of
degree
. The highest unemployment
rate
amongst all degrees
is individuals that have less than a high school diploma reaching 8% and lowest wages
538 dollars
on average weekly in 2005.Submitted by tiana29.alisjahbana on
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