In some areas of the USA, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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at night. They may come out with any older people

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relations. In my

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because reduces juvenile delinquency.

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teenagers spend more evenings at home with family and do exercises. On the one hand, around the

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there are various juvenile

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humans face

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crime

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to abuse their children and treat them as an outlet

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stress. If leaves

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or teenagers

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they want to do. In my opinion limits of miners

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the best for them. Because

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adults

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children can be close

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some teenagers who

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limits are excellent.

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waste of

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in the streets ( or computer clubs, bars or other clubs) .

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, they have a lot of homework and other

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at home, they do not save

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they come across some problems. If they spend leisure

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for lessons and their family. Maybe there are good sides for adolescents.

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minors are careful

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themselves

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families.

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they would shape relationships. No doubt , much more reading is

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for the future, so that

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is as gold and youthful must study. In conclusion, control of

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is imposed in some states of

USA

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the USA

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and they have some good sides. In my

view

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adolescents must be limited when they reach their dream or their

parents

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