While some believe that the best way to learn about current events is through newspapers, others think that they can learn new better through other forms of media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that the most outstanding source of
news
is the newspaper
, while
others argue that different forms of media such
as television, radio
, and the internet
are more suitable Capitalize word
Internet
outlet
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outlets
of
current affairs. Change preposition
for
While
newspaper
offers credibility, I believe that the TV, radio
, and the internet
are better source
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sources
news
because Change preposition
of news
people
can access it anytime.
On the one hand, people
can be sure that the information they get are
from the Unnecessary verb
apply
newspaper
are
from credible sources. Stories undergo fact-checking before they publish them. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Also
, they cover stories from background information to multiple perspective
of the issues. Change to a plural noun
perspectives
This
ensures that the reader will get accurate information and will be able to understand every views
of the story. Change to a singular noun
view
For example
, the Manila Times is one of the oldest newspaper
outlet
in the Philippines. Even though it was founded more than a century ago, they are still operating Change to a plural noun
outlets
until
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to
this
day. This
proves that people
trust their credibility. However
, it will take some time for them to release the news
because the editors have to check it first and it will take some time to print the paper.
On the other hand
, other forms of media such
as television, radio
, and the internet
are more accessible Capitalize word
Internet
outlet
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outlets
of
current affairs. They can give Change preposition
for
people
access to news
everywhere and anywhere. They allow people
to have options and compare different views from other
Change the wording
another news outlet
other news outlets
news
outlet
. Also
, it provides users real-time
updates Change preposition
with real-time
of
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on
the
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apply
news
and everyone around the globe can access it. For instance
, everyone in
the planet has a better grasp of the war between Israel and Gaza because of the Change preposition
on
news
in
television and Change preposition
on
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the internet
internet
. Capitalize word
Internet
People
are able to witness the heart-breaking damage of the war in both countries. Thus
, I believe that these sources are better than newspaper
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
while
some argue that paper-print version
of Fix the agreement mistake
versions
news
are more credible, I believe that the
TV, Correct article usage
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radio
, and social media are the best outlet
for current events because it is more accessible to individuals.Fix the agreement mistake
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