The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart gives information about the number of families in the United
State
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States
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by their yearly
income
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in the years 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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, what stands out from the graph is that in all years, most of the
households
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had the highest amount of
income
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, except for 2011.
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, families who had the lowest amount of money were negligible among others. Looking at the details, In 2007, many
households
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had 100,000 or more dollars
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income
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in income
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with about just under 30 million,
whether
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while
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those who had
the
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less than 25,000, accounted for just under 15 of
total
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a total
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number of
households
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. In 2011, individuals who had the greatest amount of
income
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saw a slight drop and levelled off at approximately 28 million. And, those with 25,000-49,999 dollar
salary
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salaries
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reached around 30 million. A group of people who had less than 25,000,
also
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rose to a bit under 30. In 2015, the earners of 100,000 or more peaked at roughly 38, and people with 75,000-99,999 stayed
at
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the lowest group at 15.
Households
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who gained less than 25,000, 25,000-49,999 and 75,000-99,999 accounted for around 27, 28 and 21,
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respectively
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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