The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.
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The line graph illustrates the data about the
number
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of
visitors
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from all over the world who arrived in five different countries between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the
number
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of tourists in the USA appeared to be the highest throughout the time frame.
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, the figure for France faced a significant rise,
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the figures for
Brazil
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and Egypt remained stable over the period. Looking at the details, the
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of
visitors
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to both Malaysia and France witnessed an almost identical trend. As regards France, the
number
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reached just above 60
million
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people in 2000, after which it increased steadily, finishing at approximately 90
million
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tourists in 2010. Meanwhile, Malaysia’s
number
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of
visitors
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saw a gradual enlarge in the period in question, finishing at around 50
million
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visitors
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. In terms of remaining countries, the rate of people who arrived in
Brazil
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and Egypt started up at the lowest with just under 10
million
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in 1995. The figure for
Brazil
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grew gradually by nearly 5
million
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and stopped at roughly 15
million
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. As opposed to
Brazil
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, despite levelling off for 10 years, the rate of
visitors
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to Egypt went up negligibly in the
last
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5 years.
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