The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the given map the large area is captured by the golf and park course
illustrate
the data of two locations for shopping Change the verb form
illustrates
centre
in Fix the agreement mistake
centres
Correct your spelling
brand field
Bradfield
brandfield
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Brandfield City
city
after the analysis, it is clearly stated that zone
s1 is located at
the Change preposition
in
city
centre
and zone
s2 is located in countryside
. in the Add an article
the countryside
direction
of northwest
Add an article
the northwest
Add a comma
,
while
the river and the main road bisecting
each other next to Replace the word
bisect
city
Add an article
the city
centre
after which, the river line move towards north and main
road goes toward east Add an article
the main
in addition
, to north direction
residential housing estate is built adjacent to s1
furthermore
, in zone
s2 railway route is there
in the northeast Rephrase
apply
direction
which surpassing
both the river and main road Wrong verb form
surpasses
next,
in the same direction
at the bottom a large industrial area is there which is used to manufactured
. in the middle, a large Change the form of the verb
manufacture
city
centre
is established for the people
recreation
Change noun form
people's
overall
, it is vividly manifested that both zone
has Change to a plural noun
zones
its
pros and cons when choosing a location for constructing a shopping Correct pronoun usage
their
centre
however
, zone
s2 has wider
area which is Add an article
a wider
major
advantage of catching Add an article
a major
the major
people
attention greatlyChange noun form
people's
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, city, zone, direction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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