The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
The slices of the pie chart illustrate local authorities spent in 2010 and 2015. The data is presented in the form of various sectors that were expended by the government.
Overall
, it may be stated that the highest consumed of twenty-four
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by the government on education.
Also
, the lowest part of one
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was invested by the government in transport, culture, leisure activities, and others in both years. It’s crystal clear from the pie chart that a major percentage of 24% was covered by education.
Also
, the education and healthcare sectors occupied a ratio of the same in both years
as well as
healthcare lost a ratio of one in 2015.
In addition
, the pension sector maintained its position the same as 19% in the previous years.
On the other hand
, the area of interest on borrowing doubled in 2015 to 10%.
Moreover
, the
defense
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lost three
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of its investment in 2015, and the welfare increased funding to 5% in 2015.
Furthermore
, transport, culture, leisure activities, and others decreased by a ratio of one and two.
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