Some people say that what children watch on television influences their behavior, while others say the amount of time children spend watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that

children

’s behaviours are impacted by either the

content

or intensity

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television

programmes. In my opinion, the

content

has a more significant impact on their acts because it can be adopted directly by them. On the first side, the frequency of watching

television

influences individuals in their early years since they will slowly memorise what they see. During the childhood period, they quickly store something peculiar and new to them.

Moreover

, it becomes stronger if they are often exposed. Consider a popular ‘Gangnam Style’ dance that was predominantly undertaken by Indonesian

children

aged 7 to 10 years old. Because they watched the clip more than three times per day through a

television

programme, they began to remember the movement, which enabled them to do the dance.

However

, I do not really think that the stored memory will affect their behaviour continuously

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since there are numerous things that they want to be remembered during their age.

On the other hand

,

others

agree on the

content

’s impacts because it shows the attitudes that can be performed directly by the viewers. Particularly,

children

have a tendency to conform to what

others

do based on what they observe and witness. If they are watching positive

content

, it will

subsequently

drive them to behave in a good manner,

whereas

negative

content

is likely to

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a bad attitude. That phenomenon has been proven by Albert Bandura in his study of some elementary students, who are divided into control and experiment groups. The control group

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assigned to watch

television

series every two hours per day

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that they

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adopted some

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or sentences from them when communicating with

others

,

whereas

the counterpart still talked in the usual way. Since the contents can give

children

a direct chance to adopt the attitudes, I agree that they can impact their behaviour. In conclusion,

while

the intensity of watching

television

makes

children

memorise vast amounts of information, I believe their behaviours are more likely to be influenced by the contents since it shows a live performance by

others

that can be directly followed by them.