The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Austrailian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Austrailian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pie charts describe the shares of
use
of household
energy
in Australia and how they affect
greenhouse
gas
emissions
.
It is clear that
most of the
energy
is used for heating in an average Australian household,
whereas
water heating is responsible for the greater portion of
greenhouse
emissions
. Despite, heating stands at 42%, it causes less than a quarter of
emissions
.
In addition
, the percentages of refrigeration and lighting are twice
higher
Correct word choice
as high
show examples
on the chart of
emissions
than on the chart of the
use
of
energy
.
In contrast
, Australian families
use
the least
energy
for cooling, only 2%, and it
also
has the least impact on
greenhouse
emissions
. All in all, the represented year can not be read from the charts,
hence
, the actuality of the information is questionable. As far as the technologies have improved in
this
couple of years, we can approximately predict that the ratios of
energy
use
and
greenhouse
gas emission will change.
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