Wild animals hace no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

It is true that wild animals play a crucial role

in

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this

planet. Some say that protecting wild

species

is a

wste

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waste

of money and

resources

in these days.

Instrongly

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I strongly

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disagree with

this

statement because wild

species

help to function ecosystem and protect

the

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natural

resources

.

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discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, wild

animal

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animals

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should be protected because they help to function the ecosystem properly.

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means all

species

of the

forest

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required to maintain

this

planet properly without any obstacles.

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, numerous wild creatures

already

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extinction

due to

a lack of conservation and protection,

consequently

, these days we face many

environment

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troubles. Needless to say, these

species

assist

to

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human's

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livelihood

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work properly

along

with

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it

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provides

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provide

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numerous

resources

to the population.

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,

these creature

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should be conserved by the conservative programs.

Furthermore

, wild

species

protect natural

resources

which

is

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forest

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forests

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and

forest

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the forest

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is their

home land

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, so they have

own

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their own

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place to survive and live without any disturbance. People build their residential

building

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buildings

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by

destroyed

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destroying

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forest

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forests

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,

as a consequence

, wild creatures have to

protect

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and

conserve

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conserved

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by the population.

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, India has plenty of animal conservation program

centers

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due to

the

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overpopulation they should use

forest

resources

for people's residential

place

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, so destroyed numerous amount of

forest

areas. Hereby,

eild

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wild

mild

creatures need to be protected. In conclusion, wild animals should be conserved

in

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these days because

it

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helps

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help

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to function

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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properly

as well as

protect

the

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natural

resources

like

forest

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forests

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.

Therefore

, I strongly disagree with that statement because wild animals have their homeland which is

forest

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the forest

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, so they should

protect

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be protected

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.