The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling
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The charts below represent the number of several consumer goods in certain European countries.
Overall
,it is evident that photographic films
have the biggest numbers for Britain,France,Italy and Germany.
To commence with the biggest amount of spent on consumer goods in Britain was photographic films
, which made up approximately 170,respectively.In second place
were toys and CDs, which accounted for about 168 and 165,consequently
.Moreover
, France has the same trend as the UK such
as photographic films
, which comprised 165 and then
there were CDs with 158.Then
in third place
, there were toys , which accounted for 156.
On the other hand
, there were the statistics for Italy,the biggest amount spent on consumer goods was toys , which made up about 157 and then
in the second place
, there were tennis racquets,perfumes and photographic film, which comprised 155.Furthermore
, there was a statistic for Germany,where perfumes,tennis racquets and photographic films
showed the biggest numbers , which made up 150,consequently
.Then
on the second place
was personal stereos , which comprised about 147.
It may be concluded that photographic films
showed the biggest numbers for each country.Submitted by kassymov_99 on
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