Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people are in
the
favour of Correct article usage
apply
students
mandatory social work
while
studying at school. I strongly disagree with this
pehnomenon
because parents admit their offspring primarily for studies Correct your spelling
phenomenon
not
for unpaid labourer Add the comma(s)
, not
work
. Moreover
, if community services
are imposed on students
, they will ultimately rebel.
An enormous amount of people prefer that students
should perform some compulsory social work
. This
will help them to develop intepersonal
skills by socialising with Correct your spelling
interpersonal
community
, in Correct article usage
the community
this
way, they will not only contribute to society but also
foster their communication skills. However
, by imposing such
responsibilities, they will resnet. They can only be asked for volunteer services
which is definitely going to be Correct article usage
a much
much
Correct article usage
a much
effective
strategy. Correct quantifier usage
more effective
For example
, many adolescents take part in plantation campaigns during holidays on voluntary
basis but resent if forced to do the same activity.
Add an article
a voluntary
Conversely
, I believe that students
are at school for the purpose of education so they should focus on their studies rather than indulging themselves in distractions. Students
can only perform well in academics and master their skills if they have consistent concentration which helps them to secure jobs at workplaces. Moreover
, parents do not send their children to schools for social services
rather authorities are responsible for this
. For instance
, many managerial and director level
job position holders have distinctions in their academics.
In conclusion, even though some people take mandatory student community Add a hyphen
director-level
services
into consideration, I completey
disagree, Correct your spelling
completely
this
way students
not only show resentment but also
can not particularly focus on their studies rather
Correct word choice
but rather
obliged
to do labourer Add a missing verb
are obliged
work
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