The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
process
of small-scale commercial honey
production
is a multi-step process
that involves both bee and human phases. Bees
are responsible for gathering nectar from flowers, which they store in cells within the hive. Once the cells reach maximum capacity, bees
seal them with wax. At this
point, honeycombs are gathered, and the process
of extracting honey
begins.
The first step in extracting honey
is pressing the honeycombs to extract the honey
within them. The honey
is then
passed through a sieve tank to remove any impurities
that may be present. After
this
, the honey
is heated in a sump tank to around 45-50°C. This
heating process
helps to kill any bacteria that may be present in the honey
and also
makes it easier for the honey
to flow. Once the honey
has been heated, it is transferred to settling tanks for 2-4 days. This
allows any remaining impurities
to settle at the bottom of the tank. During this
time, the honey
is left undisturbed, and gravity does the work of separating any impurities
.
Finally
, the clarified honey
is deposited into jars for selling
. The jars are carefully Replace the word
sale
labeled
with important information Change the spelling
labelled
such
as the type of honey
, the date of production
, and the producer's name. In this
way, customers can be assured that the honey
they are buying is of high quality and has undergone a stringent production
process
.
In summary, the process
of small-scale commercial honey
production
involves several stages, including gathering nectar, extracting honey
from combs, removing impurities
, heating, settling, and packaging for sale. Both bees
and humans play important roles in this
process
, with bees
responsible for gathering and storing nectar, and humans handling the extraction, processing, and selling of the honey
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