The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The visual representation demonstrates the production of

honey

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in a small-scale commercial,

while

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showing the main factors and the process from the beginning.

Overall

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, in the procedure, two main phases can be distinguished:

bee

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the bee

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phase and

human

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the human

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phase. It starts from the gathering of nectar and

ending

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ends

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in the selling of

honey

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to other shops or businesses.

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, the bees start to

achieve

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collect

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some nectar, resulting in storing pure

honey

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.

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, whilst time is passing, it is now getting dried up

and

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the fan wings are keeping the spaces neat and representing the end of the bee phase.

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, people seal the cello with wax in some cases and

then

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collect the

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honeycombs

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honey

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combs. They are

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pressed

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some fresh

honey

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is obtained. Using

machineries

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machinery

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, it is placed into a slump tank, which is

heating

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heated

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to 45-50 degrees Celsius

and

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, and

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then

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it passes through the sieve tank that removes dirt. The end of the process is the

honey

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being set into jars and transported to be sold.