The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
process
of small-scale commercial Use synonyms
honey
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production
is a multi-step Use synonyms
process
that involves both bee and human phases. Use synonyms
Bees
are responsible for gathering nectar from flowers, which they store in cells within the hive. Once the cells reach maximum capacity, Use synonyms
bees
seal them with wax. At Use synonyms
this
point, honeycombs are gathered, and the Linking Words
process
of extracting Use synonyms
honey
begins.
The first step in extracting Use synonyms
honey
is pressing the honeycombs to extract the Use synonyms
honey
within them. The Use synonyms
honey
is Use synonyms
then
passed through a sieve tank to remove any Linking Words
impurities
that may be present. Use synonyms
After
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this
, the Linking Words
honey
is heated in a sump tank to around 45-50°C. Use synonyms
This
heating Linking Words
process
helps to kill any bacteria that may be present in the Use synonyms
honey
and Use synonyms
also
makes it easier for the Linking Words
honey
to flow. Once the Use synonyms
honey
has been heated, it is transferred to settling tanks for 2-4 days. Use synonyms
This
allows any remaining Linking Words
impurities
to settle at the bottom of the tank. During Use synonyms
this
time, the Linking Words
honey
is left undisturbed, and gravity does the work of separating any Use synonyms
impurities
.
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Finally
, the clarified Linking Words
honey
is deposited into jars for Use synonyms
selling
. The jars are carefully Replace the word
sale
labeled
with important information Change the spelling
labelled
such
as the type of Linking Words
honey
, the date of Use synonyms
production
, and the producer's name. In Use synonyms
this
way, customers can be assured that the Linking Words
honey
they are buying is of high quality and has undergone a stringent Use synonyms
production
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process
.
In summary, the Use synonyms
process
of small-scale commercial Use synonyms
honey
Use synonyms
production
involves several stages, including gathering nectar, extracting Use synonyms
honey
from combs, removing Use synonyms
impurities
, heating, settling, and packaging for sale. Both Use synonyms
bees
and humans play important roles in Use synonyms
this
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process
, with Use synonyms
bees
responsible for gathering and storing nectar, and humans handling the extraction, processing, and selling of the Use synonyms
honey
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