The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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production of

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.

Overall

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it is clear that

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honey

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production has 2 main stages, the first one being the bee

phase

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, and the second one is the human

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.

Initially

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, the bee

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starts with bees gathering nectar

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and depositing

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in their hives.

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, the

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is dried, and the bees ensure that the cells are kept clean. After the bee

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is finished, the human stage

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, the cells get sealed with wax, and

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honey combs

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honeycombs

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are gathered. The

honey

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combs get pressed, and

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is extracted. After that, the extracted

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is poured into a sump

tank

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, where it is heated to 45-50 degrees Celsius.

Honey

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is

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moved into a sieve

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, which removes dirt

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and other debris. Moving on, the

honey

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is poured from the sieve

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into a settling

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, where it rests for 2-4 days.

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, the

honey

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is packed in jars

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and is ready to be sold.