The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The given maps illustrate changes were happened in the town of Willington in various periods 1780, 1860 and 2000. From the
overall
perspective, villages
were emerged
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emerged
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enormously in the given
last
period as compared
the
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previous period. Another noticeable interesting alter was
farm
land, it removed by
bridge
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a bridge
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. In detail, in 1780,there was
not
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no
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bridge but
the
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in the
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next period bridge was constructed between
river
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rivers
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. Houses were located
in
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apply
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near
farm
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farms
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, which was 100
homes
but
homes
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the homes
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number
was increases
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was increased
was increasing
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by 200 in 1860 and it
was
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increased rapidly which was 500
homes
in 2000. In 1780,
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the farm
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farm
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a farm
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situated
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was situated
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in
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apply
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near the river and it was reduced by
sizes
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size
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in
other
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the other
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next two periods
while
many shops were built near bridges in 2000. In 1780
,
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and 1860, both these periods school
was
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were
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not there but in 2000, two schools were newly constructed by removed
woods place
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Woods Place
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.
Similarly
, sports fields were built newly in 2000 near school, which was three.
Likewise
, in 2000,
wetland
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a wetland
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was constructed newly and it was
suitiated
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situated
bottom
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the bottom
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of the river
as well as
farm
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a farm
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area was made newly between the
homes
and schools.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words farm, homes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • changes
  • occurred
  • 1780
  • 1860
  • 2000
  • map
  • show
  • named
  • Willington
  • introduction
  • overview
  • comparison
  • conclusion
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