The Following Diagram Shows how Greenhouse Gases Trap Energy from The Sun

The Following Diagram Shows how Greenhouse Gases Trap Energy from The Sun
The natural process illustrates how the
energy
coming from the Sun is retained by
greenhouse
gases.
Overall
,
this
is a complex process which
contain
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two phases
includes
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producing
greenhouse
gas emissions and
energy
is
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trapped in the Earth. The process commences with how the emission gases are produced, CO2 and other pollutants are always emitted by human activities
such
as industrial
factory
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,
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and engine's
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engine's
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vehicles which can easily
to
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release
the
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carbon dioxide.
Additionally
, deforestation is
also
an important reason because there
is
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no more trees
can
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absorb the carbon dioxide in the air to make it clean and fresh so the pollutants
is
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released into the atmosphere. Regarding the second phase of how these
greenhouse
gas
emission
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emissions
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trapping
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energy
, the Sun emits the
energy
and it reaches the Earth's surface as heat and
make
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it warm.
Subsequently
, some of
this
heat
energy
is radiated into space
whereas
the others
is
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trapped by the
greenhouse
gases so that it is reflected off
atmosphere
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, leading to a warming effect.
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