The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line chart illustrates the figures
of
tourists visiting a certain Caribbean island over ten years (from 2010 to 2017). Units are measured in millions of Change preposition
for
visitors
.
Overall
, the largest number of tourists was at the end
of the period. Also
, there was a significant climb in the ratio of visitors
staying on cruise ships; in contrast
, the proportion of visitors
staying on land fluctuated slightly.
It is clear from the graph that the total number of visitors
started at 1 million
, then
improved dramatically to reach a peak of 3.5 million
at the end
of the interval. Whereas
, the percentage of tourists staying on cruises began at just under.
5million, after which there was considerable growth by around 1.5 Correct your spelling
under
million
in 2017.
In regard to visitors
who stay on the island, it started at just over 0.5million
, followed by a slight rise to nearly 1 Correct your spelling
0.5 million
million
in 2013, then
a fluctuation to reach 1.5 million
at the end
of the span.Submitted by rawanzoubi3 on
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