The table below shows the results of a survey carried out with visitors to the London Natural History Museum. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of a survey carried out with visitors

to the London Natural History Museum.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table presents the
number
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of
visitors
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to the London Natural History Museum in 2000, 2010, and 2020, categorized by their reasons for visiting.
Overall
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, there was an increase in
visitors
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for tourism and school trips over the years,
while
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the numbers for other reasons displayed slight fluctuations.
Firstly
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, there was a noticeable growth in the
number
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of tourists, rising from 7 in 2000 to 13 in 2010, and
further
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to 22 in 2020. School trips
also
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showed an increase from 15 in 2000 to 22 in 2010,
although
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there was a slight drop to 20 in 2020.
Moreover
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, the
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visitors
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number of visitors
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coming to see specific displays started at 52 in 2000, decreased slightly to 48 in 2010, and increased to 51 in 2020. The
number
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of
visitors
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citing work reasons experienced minimal variation, with a peak at 11 in 2010,
while
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it was recorded as 10 in both 2000 and 2020, assuming the
last
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number
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remains consistent with the year 2000 figure.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "displayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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