In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishments. To what extent do you agree
Unfortunately, these days the number of youth
crimes
is increasing in some countries. Some people
argue that to deal with these crimes
, young people
should be punished as much as adults. Although
youngsters need punish
when they commit a crime, I personally believe they should receive a lighter sentence than adults.
Wrong verb form
punished
To begin
with, if young children receive adult punishment, they might be negatively influenced by time in adult prisons. That is
to say that, they may meet people
in prison who have committed very serious crimes
and wrongly emulate them. For instance
, they may learn about many crimes
that did not know about before, such
as theft and extortion. Moreover
, heavy sentences may have an adverse effect on their mental health. Consequently
, they may suffer from depression and anxiety in the future.
In addition
, teenagers are not fully responsible for their action
. Fix the agreement mistake
actions
In other words
, they do not have much experience and do not know the world properly; sometimes they are not aware of Correct article usage
the consequent
consequent
of their action. Replace the word
consequences
For example
, they do not know that many murders happen when people
are angry. Also
youngsters need re-education, not punishment and Add a comma
Also,
it is clear that
bad behavior
is easier to change when a person is young. Take teaching jobs that can earn money from an early age as a patently obvious example, which can be useful for improving one’s character and standing in the future.
In conclusion, Change the spelling
behaviour
youth
Correct your spelling
young
people
must be punished so that they do not repeat they
crime again, but a punishment suitable for their age that will have a positive effect on them, not a negative one.Correct your spelling
the
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