in the recent years, the number of crimes comitted by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasones and suggest some solutions.
The increasing number of crimes that are committed by young
people
in big cities throughout the world has becoming
a big issue Change the verb form
become
especially
for society. The main reasons Add the comma(s)
, especially
of
Change preposition
for
this
issue are the free access to social media
and internet
without parental Correct article usage
the internet
advisory
or guidance and Replace the word
advice
also
the young people
are prone to stress from comparing themselves with others then
it
leads to Correct pronoun usage
which
cyber bullying
or bullying at Correct your spelling
cyberbullying
school
. This
passage will discuss the issue on
the next paragraph.
Nowadays, Change preposition
in
modern
family let their Add an article
the modern
children
to
access the Change the verb form
apply
internet
from such
a young age. In fact, some of them intentionally show their Correct quantifier usage
apply
children
how to use gadget
since young, so the Fix the agreement mistake
gadgets
parents
can reduce the tantrum
of their Fix the agreement mistake
tantrums
children
or to
distract them from being “naughty” to become silent or obedient. Fix the infinitive
apply
This
method works for some period of time, however
after their children
grow up, it will subconsciously build a characteristics
of ignorance and Fix the agreement mistake
characteristic
addicted
to the Replace the word
addiction
phone
, therefore
this
Correct pronoun usage
which
lead
to a bigger problem. Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
For example
, the parents
punish their children
from
looking too much on the Change preposition
for
phone
while
eating or ignore
their Wrong verb form
ignoring
parents
questions by taking their Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
phone
for a month or a week, then
the children
will reduce the
boredom by doing extreme Change the word
their
thing
like arson, stealing, or speeding on the road to express their frustration.
Fix the agreement mistake
things
Moreover
, the younger generation typically
prone to stress because of the easy access to social Add a missing verb
is typically
media
. They will keep comparing themselves with other children
on social media
, even though in the
reality Correct article usage
apply
people
only share good things on social media
, or sometimes fake event
just to get more likes or followers. Fix the agreement mistake
events
Furthermore
, this
creates a group gang in the school
, where the popular children
that
get more likes and followers will bully the Correct pronoun usage
who
children
that
are considered Correct pronoun usage
who
as
unpopular or unique. Change preposition
apply
This
could lead the
young Correct article usage
apply
people
that
are considered Correct pronoun usage
who
as
unpopular Correct word choice
apply
express
their Fix the infinitive
to express
feeling
Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
by
revenge. Change preposition
with
For example
, the
Change preposition
in the
school
shooting incident in Texas, whereas
the shooter Correct word choice
apply
that
shot so many innocent students Correct pronoun usage
who
act
only Wrong verb form
acted
by
the feeling of rejection and revenge because he was bullied in the Change preposition
apply
school
.
In my opinion, to prevent the unfortunate things that happen to the children
, we need to act now. Especially the parents
and teacher’s
role, as a parent, we can limit our Change noun form
teachers
children
Change noun form
children's
internet
consumptions
and activate the parental mode on their Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
phone
so we can track their search keywords and what kind of information Fix the agreement mistake
phones
that
they get from the Correct pronoun usage
apply
internet
. As teacher
, we need to educate our students to not bully each other and implement character Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
building
program so the Correct your spelling
character-building
children
will understand that their small or big action
impact Fix the agreement mistake
actions
to
both themselves and Change preposition
apply
the
society. In conclusion, the Correct article usage
apply
children
environment Change noun form
children's
determined
the shape of their character and mindset, and to achieve that we need to protect our Wrong verb form
determines
children
from unnecessary information and introduce them to the traditional ways of entertaining themselves for example
like
arts, music, extracurricular activities, or traditional games.Change preposition
apply
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