in the recent years, the number of crimes comitted by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasones and suggest some solutions.

The increasing number of crimes that are committed by young
people
in big cities throughout the world has
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a big issue
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for society. The main reasons
of
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this
issue are the free access to social
media
and
internet
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without parental
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or guidance and
also
the young
people
are prone to stress from comparing themselves with others
then
it
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leads to
cyber bullying
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cyberbullying
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or bullying at
school
.
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passage will discuss the issue
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the next paragraph. Nowadays,
modern
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family let their
children
to
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access the
internet
from
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a young age. In fact, some of them intentionally show their
children
how to use
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since young, so the
parents
can reduce the
tantrum
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of their
children
or
to
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distract them from being “naughty” to become silent or obedient.
This
method works for some period of time,
however
after their
children
grow up, it will subconsciously build a
characteristics
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of ignorance and
addicted
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to the
phone
,
therefore
this
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lead
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to a bigger problem.
For example
, the
parents
punish their
children
from
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looking too much on the
phone
while
eating or
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their
parents
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questions by taking their
phone
for a month or a week,
then
the
children
will reduce
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boredom by doing extreme
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things
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like arson, stealing, or speeding on the road to express their frustration.
Moreover
, the younger generation
typically
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prone to stress because of the easy access to social
media
. They will keep comparing themselves with other
children
on social
media
, even though in
the
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reality
people
only share good things on social
media
, or sometimes fake
event
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just to get more likes or followers.
Furthermore
,
this
creates a group gang in the
school
, where the popular
children
that
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get more likes and followers will bully the
children
that
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are considered
as
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unpopular or unique.
This
could lead
the
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young
people
that
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are considered
as
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unpopular
express
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their
feeling
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feelings
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by
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revenge.
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,
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school
shooting incident in Texas,
whereas
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the shooter
that
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shot so many innocent students
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only
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the feeling of rejection and revenge because he was bullied in the
school
. In my opinion, to prevent the unfortunate things that happen to the
children
, we need to act now. Especially the
parents
and
teacher’s
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role, as a parent, we can limit our
children
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children's
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internet
consumptions
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consumption
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and activate the parental mode on their
phone
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phones
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so we can track their search keywords and what kind of information
that
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they get from the
internet
. As
teacher
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teachers
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, we need to educate our students to not bully each other and implement character
building
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program so the
children
will understand that their small or big
action
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actions
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impact
to
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both themselves and
the
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society. In conclusion, the
children
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environment
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the shape of their character and mindset, and to achieve that we need to protect our
children
from unnecessary information and introduce them to the traditional ways of entertaining themselves
for example
like
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arts, music, extracurricular activities, or traditional games.
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