in the recent years, the number of crimes comitted by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasones and suggest some solutions.

The increasing number of crimes that are committed by young

people

in big cities throughout the world has

becoming

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a big issue

especially

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for society. The main reasons

of

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this

issue are the free access to social

media

and

internet

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without parental

advisory

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or guidance and

also

the young

people

are prone to stress from comparing themselves with others

then

it

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leads to

cyber bullying

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cyberbullying

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or bullying at

school

.

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passage will discuss the issue

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the next paragraph. Nowadays,

modern

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family let their

children

to

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access the

internet

from

such

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a young age. In fact, some of them intentionally show their

children

how to use

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since young, so the

parents

can reduce the

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of their

children

or

to

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distract them from being “naughty” to become silent or obedient.

This

method works for some period of time,

however

after their

children

grow up, it will subconsciously build a

characteristics

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of ignorance and

addicted

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to the

phone

,

therefore

this

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lead

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to a bigger problem.

For example

, the

parents

punish their

children

from

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looking too much on the

phone

while

eating or

ignore

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their

parents

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questions by taking their

phone

for a month or a week,

then

the

children

will reduce

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boredom by doing extreme

thing

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like arson, stealing, or speeding on the road to express their frustration.

Moreover

, the younger generation

typically

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prone to stress because of the easy access to social

media

. They will keep comparing themselves with other

children

on social

media

, even though in

the

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reality

people

only share good things on social

media

, or sometimes fake

event

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just to get more likes or followers.

Furthermore

,

this

creates a group gang in the

school

, where the popular

children

that

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get more likes and followers will bully the

children

that

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are considered

as

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unpopular or unique.

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could lead

the

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young

people

that

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are considered

as

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unpopular

express

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their

feeling

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feelings

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by

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revenge.

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,

the

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school

shooting incident in Texas,

whereas

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the shooter

that

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shot so many innocent students

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only

by

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the feeling of rejection and revenge because he was bullied in the

school

. In my opinion, to prevent the unfortunate things that happen to the

children

, we need to act now. Especially the

parents

and

teacher’s

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role, as a parent, we can limit our

children

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children's

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internet

consumptions

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consumption

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and activate the parental mode on their

phone

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phones

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so we can track their search keywords and what kind of information

that

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they get from the

internet

. As

teacher

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teachers

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, we need to educate our students to not bully each other and implement character

building

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program so the

children

will understand that their small or big

action

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impact

to

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both themselves and

the

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society. In conclusion, the

children

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environment

determined

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the shape of their character and mindset, and to achieve that we need to protect our

children

from unnecessary information and introduce them to the traditional ways of entertaining themselves

for example

like

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arts, music, extracurricular activities, or traditional games.