The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
The image below shows us, how a
piece
of animal skin
will be transformed into the leather
good in a few steps.
Overall
, there are more than ten procces
about how to produce Correct your spelling
process
leather
goods.
Firstly
, we need the animal skin
, after that
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that,
the first step is
to dry the skin
and transported
Wrong verb form
transport
to
the Correct pronoun usage
it to
factory
. Once we have the material we need to wash that in the water and lime mix.
Secondly
, the next procces
is Correct your spelling
process
the
soaking, the animal Change the article
apply
skin
will stay in the lime, and after that with
a roll flattening machine will make the Change preposition
apply
piece
flat and putting
in the Verb problem
apply
mixed
of water and vegetable matter, Replace the word
mix
wich
is called tannin Correct your spelling
which
and
will stay for soaking and just after that the future Correct word choice
apply
piece
of leather
, it will be polished and ready to be transported to another factory
, where will be used to produce different products, like clothes, shoes and purses.
In conclusion, to transorm
the animal Correct your spelling
transform
skin
, into the
Correct article usage
a
piece
of leather
, we need the first factory
where we produce leather
follow
Wrong verb form
following
few
steps, and another Correct article usage
a few
factory
to produce different products with the leather
we make it
.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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