Some people believe that music should be taught in schools, while others think that it is best to focus on computer and science. Discuss both views and your opinion.
Nowadays,
whereas
more and more people are considering that teaching computer technology and science
at schools is much more important than music
, others feel that music
is also
an essential part of a school curriculum.
Admittedly, in the technological era, it is highly demanded to learn computer programs as well as
scientific subjects
such
as astronomy, physics, chemistry and so on because every employee should be aware of using a computer or have ample knowledge of science
. As a result
of this
, it is possible for workers to get promotions easily and quickly. That's why in most schools, it is compulsory to educate pupils on these subjects
so that they can provide organisations or companies with professional employees. In Japan, for instance
, pupils have to create something new based on technology or science
before finishing school. Otherwise
, they can not get any qualifications or diplomas from their schools.
When it comes to music
, it is also
necessary to improve teenagers' cognitive development and get some kind of relaxation among other academic subjects
. Therefore
, music
should not be removed from school subjects
as it is a therapy for pupils and students in order to concentrate on anything they want to learn. As an example of this
view, in ancient Sparta, boys were taught music
and poetry to enhance their loyalty to their own country and encourage them to defend their motherland. That is
why there is a special song in every army throughout the world. For
this
reason, music
has a crucial role in forming social and emotional skills among youngsters.
In conclusion, while
most individuals find computers and science
more useful than music
these days, I strongly believe that it would be better to keep a balance in teaching both of them.Submitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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