The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
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The following data describes the signings of abroad scholars and regional tutees in Australian colleges from 2001 to 2010 age of time. looking from an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that overseas students have fewer enrolments than the local ones with 20000 in the first moment.
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, the total of international colleges has jumped rapidly to approximately 80000 in the final period. As for remaining, In the beginning stage, the number of foreign countries students are in commercing went up 40000 from under 20000 between 2001 and 2009. But, In the
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two periods of the year, it did not increase significantly. The registration of village freshmen in total climbed dramatically from 40000 to 60000 in seven years. Despite that, Since 2007 it has stayed at the same percentage.
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, Local students in commercials started just below 20000 the first year but it remained in the
last
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moment .
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