Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while other believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion

Industrial and everyday human

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cause significant changes

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the ecosystem.

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and

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are exposed to these harmful practices. It is argued whether

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negative phenomenon remains the same, or it can be changed to achieve a better impact on

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wildlife. I believe that there are several other ways that can alter or substitute these detrimental

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, and these are not only necessary

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animals

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and

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, but for humans too. Those who argue that it is impossible to change these negative effects

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caused by human

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have a point. In terms of industrial

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,

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excessive gas emissions are detrimental to the environment, not every company can introduce sustainable practices because of their technological limitations or simply

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cannot afford it.

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, it may occur that businesses are prioritizing their short-term interests rather than

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sustainable and long-term ones. In

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way, it may be

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plan for some, but I think only the first steps are the hardest in

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case.

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changes and sustainable solutions might be expensive,

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would be beneficial for

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,

plants

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and people. On the

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hand, global warming is one of the

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human

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, which can be combatted in many ways.

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,

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of fossil

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companies can use renewable energy sources

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as solar systems or hydropower.

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, these actions can be regulated by the government,

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exposing prices on hazardous gas emissions.

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might reduce the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, which has an extremely negative impact on the ecosystem. In conclusion, people need to be aware of their actions that can damage nature including

animals

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and

plants

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. I believe that these

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can be changed

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a better way if people join together aiming to make a cleaner and greener world.