Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while other believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion

Industrial and everyday human

activities

cause significant changes

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the ecosystem.

Animals

and

plants

are exposed to these harmful practices. It is argued whether

this

negative phenomenon remains the same, or it can be changed to achieve a better impact on

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wildlife. I believe that there are several other ways that can alter or substitute these detrimental

activities

, and these are not only necessary

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animals

and

plants

, but for humans too. Those who argue that it is impossible to change these negative effects

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caused by human

activities

have a point. In terms of industrial

activities

,

while

excessive gas emissions are detrimental to the environment, not every company can introduce sustainable practices because of their technological limitations or simply

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cannot afford it.

Additionally

, it may occur that businesses are prioritizing their short-term interests rather than

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sustainable and long-term ones. In

this

way, it may be

unrealistic

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plan for some, but I think only the first steps are the hardest in

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case.

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changes and sustainable solutions might be expensive,

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would be beneficial for

animals

,

plants

and people. On the

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hand, global warming is one of the

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human

activities

, which can be combatted in many ways.

For instance

,

instead

of fossil

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companies can use renewable energy sources

such

as solar systems or hydropower.

Also

, these actions can be regulated by the government,

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exposing prices on hazardous gas emissions.

This

might reduce the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, which has an extremely negative impact on the ecosystem. In conclusion, people need to be aware of their actions that can damage nature including

animals

and

plants

. I believe that these

activities

can be changed

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a better way if people join together aiming to make a cleaner and greener world.