The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the percentage of households with different kinds of
technology
over a period of four years between 1995 and 1999. There are five kinds of technology
reported which is
washing Correct subject-verb agreement
are
machine
,Fix the agreement mistake
machines
phone
,internet,Fix the agreement mistake
phones
computer
and DVD Fix the agreement mistake
computers
player
.
Fix the agreement mistake
players
Overall
it clearly be
seen that the washing machine was the most popular Change the verb form
is
technology
at that time with the highest percentage for all the given periods, followed by computer
in the second. The other three start with a lower level at the beginning period but show an increase until the end of the period.
In terms of the Correct article usage
the computer
technology
with the higher percentage, the washing machine stood at exactly 60% in 1995. In the following four years, the number increased slightly by precisely 20% and reached its peak at 80% in the final year.Submitted by Deddymus on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words technology with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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