The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.
The line graph presents the
precentage
of various equipment used by Correct your spelling
percentage
the
families in the United States of America between 1995 and 1999.
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apply
Overall
, throughout the given period
washing machine
still held Fix the agreement mistake
machines
its
position as the most owned technology in Correct pronoun usage
their
United
States of America. The quantity of phone users skyrocketed Correct article usage
the United
in
the over years and became the second most used technology surpassing Change preposition
apply
computer
, Fix the agreement mistake
computers
internet
, and DVD Correct article usage
the internet
player
.
The number of Washing machineFix the agreement mistake
players
owner
experienced a drastic increase in the 1995 to 1996 Fix the agreement mistake
owners
period
, from 60 per cent until
70 per cent. Since Change preposition
to
then
, the figure hovered and peaked at 80 percent
in 1999. The gradual increase over years trend followed by the quantity of Change the spelling
per cent
the
computer usersCorrect article usage
apply
,
started Remove the comma
apply
with
only 40 Change preposition
at
percent
in the first Change the spelling
per cent
year
, it managed to reached
the number of 60 Change the verb
reach
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
in
the end of the shown Change the preposition
at
period
. Another technology that shown
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shows
the
stable growth during the Correct article usage
apply
period
is internet
. Starting at the lowest point in the first Add an article
the internet
year
, the number of internet users gradually increased and peaked to
50 Change preposition
at
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
last
year
.
The precentage
of the phone owner quantity Correct your spelling
percentage
shown
a stable growth until 1996 at 20 Wrong verb form
showed
percent
. However
, after that particular year
, it increased drastically and peaked at the precentage
of around 70 Correct your spelling
percentage
percent
in 1996. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
to the DVD play which was the only technlogy
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technology
experienced
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that experienced
the
downfall in 1996.Correct article usage
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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