The number of old people is increasing. Some think this will cause problems for countries while others believe old people still have value. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some
people
hold the notion that the
senior citizens are Correct article usage
apply
burden
on the country and Add an article
a burden
other
think that Fix the agreement mistake
others
the
older Correct article usage
apply
people
are no less than treasure
. I agree that all Fix the agreement mistake
treasures
the
countries need Correct article usage
apply
such
an experienced individuals
in order to grow their nation.
To commence with , older ones are having different kinds of health issues Correct the article-noun agreement
an experienced individual
experienced individuals
that
is why they feel difficulty in Correct pronoun usage
which
the
independent survival Correct article usage
apply
also
they need someone who can take care of them hence
, this
really cause
pressure on the government's budget. Change the verb form
causes
For instance
, retirement homes are established by the higher authorities and they also
hired
Wrong verb form
hire
the
personal support workers to support Correct article usage
apply
the
senior citizens. All these facilities really need Correct article usage
apply
huge
amount of money to support Add an article
a huge
this
program.This
is the only reason why some masses have the opinion that older people
are devastated for
Change preposition
by
the
society.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
and
I Correct word choice
apply
also
believe that they are highly intelligent, serene and generous people
who did
Verb problem
have
work
hard in their whole Wrong verb form
worked
life
and performed Fix the agreement mistake
lives
an amazing tasks
for the welfare of the country.Correct the article-noun agreement
amazing tasks
an amazing task
For instance
,some of them were in the military to protect the
society from the enemies, others were doctors and teachers. The higher authorities deducted taxes from their salaries and general revenue . Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, the prime minister of India is also
a
old man who Change the article
an
always
up for the welfare of the public. Add a missing verb
is always
Furthermore
, the younger generation have
to learn Change the verb form
has
alot
from their experiences, Correct your spelling
a lot
how
they tackled all the problems .
Correct word choice
and how
To conclude
, old is gold . This
is the responsibility of the country and the citizens to care of
them when they are unable to help themselves . The grandchildren will get their blessings if they can take their grandparents.Change preposition
for
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