The diagram below shows the process of making dirty water clean and usable again. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram depicts the
process
of sewage Use synonyms
water
recycling. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is evident that the Linking Words
process
comprises three main stages, beginning with wastewater being treated in a sewage plant and finishing with purified Use synonyms
water
for domestic use.
In the first stage, household wastewater from various sources Use synonyms
such
as restrooms, baths, and sinks is released into sewers that lead to a sewage treatment plant. Linking Words
Then
, it is contained in tanks from which solid matter is extracted for the purpose of creating fertilizer.
In the next stage, in order to eliminate remaining organisms, special bacteria capable of digesting them will be introduced into the Linking Words
water
. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, a small volume of treated Linking Words
water
is released into rivers.
Use synonyms
At the end
of the Linking Words
process
, the Use synonyms
water
undergoes Use synonyms
further
treatment at a purification facility. A certain amount of additional Linking Words
water
will be added during the Use synonyms
process
. Use synonyms
Finally
, when the Linking Words
water
meets the standards for consumption, it will be distributed to households via Use synonyms
water
mains to be used again.Use synonyms
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