Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is said that a part of workers who pay
tax
consider their contribution Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
done
to help their Unnecessary verb
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country
. But some of them say that only big companies should have to pay it
. In Change preposition
for it
this
essay, I will explain both side
and give my opinion.
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sides
In
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On
one
hand, people who pay Correct article usage
the one
tax
for their Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
country
are mostly only the
workers. There are different percentages of Correct article usage
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taxes
for the
wages. If someone Correct article usage
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earn
twice the amount of money Change the verb form
earns
than
his neighbor, obviously his Change preposition
as
taxes
will not be the same. In this
case, peoples
consider to help enough their Fix the agreement mistake
people
country
.
On the other hand
, some people think that only big companies who impact the
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apply
society
should have to pay taxes
. There are many members of society
with big responsibilities and a lot of money who could be able to cover the taxes
of all citizens. Nowadays, people with the minimum wage survive.They pay for food shopping, pay the rent, pay the fuel and also
have to pay their tax at the end
of the month. Big companies already put taxes
on all those products ( food, fuel…).
In conclusion, a part of citizens are happy to pay taxes
to contribute for
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to
a
good development of their Correct article usage
the
country
like having a
medical insurance. The other part would Remove the article
apply
prefer
have more money Add the particle
prefer to
at the end
of the month and let big influencer
of Fix the agreement mistake
influencers
the
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society
pay for everyone. In my opinion
everyone who works should help the government by paying Add a comma
opinion,
taxes
to develop the
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apply
society
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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