The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided picture shows the number of smartphones sold in different periods, from 2006 to 2012.
Overall
, is it obvious that the statistics of
selling Change preposition
for
Nokia
is
the highest, and Apple were less than every brand apart from all five.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
According to
the record of selling the brand
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brands
called
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Nokia
and Samsung from the year
2006- Fix the agreement mistake
years
2008
had surged gradually. The next year the Change preposition
to 2008
Nokia
trend dropped, but Samsung continuously went up. In 2010 - 2011, the number of both brands were
in the opposite Correct subject-verb agreement
was
ways
, Fix the agreement mistake
way
Nokia
rebounded back and Samsung was
slightly decreased. Both companies ended up with a bigger number than others. During the past six years, the data shows that Ericsson and Motorola have considerably surged and plunged in some years but they both ended up at the same place at only 28. Unnecessary verb
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Lastly
, The industry of Apple was in an upward trend, in which the usage of the brand had been
slowly Verb problem
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claimed up
every year and stopped at almost 150.Verb problem
increased
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