Write a letter to your friend who is coming over to stay with you. However,you will be away for a month. Write her a letter about hiw to get keys of the home and share other details related to the stay

Dear Ana, I hope you are doing fine. It's been a
while
since we have
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up. As we have discussed earlier, I will not
able
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to spend
time
with you
this
time
. I was thinking
to meet
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you
at
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your arrival but, unfortunately, I will not be able to do so. I will leave the city on 7th
june
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just before the day of your arrival.
However
, I have already told one of my dearest
friend
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, and neighbour 'Anita' to accompany you during your journey
to
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home
. She will be there for you at the airport and will
also
handover
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the keys
of
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my
home
to you. You can call her any
time
for any help. Her phone number is 88976699. I
also
like you to know that my homekeeper usually comes 5 times a week. So, you don't have to worry about watering the plants and other cleaning stuff, as she will help you
in
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cooking and cleaning work. As you know, there are many beautiful places to visit in Sidney. You can visit
botanical
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a botanical
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garden, green park and history museum anytime which is
on
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within
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a
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walking distance from my
home
. I
akso
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also
want to inform you about my arrival
time
. I will come
on
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9th
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the 9th
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of
july
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at
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sydney
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Sydney
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.My flight will arrive at 9:00 am and
i
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will reach
at
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home
around 11 am .As
i
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already have
dpare
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spare
keys,
ypu
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you
don't have to be worried about my arrival. I hope you enjoy your visit. Please don't hesitate to contact me for any help. Lots of love. With best regards, Saba
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Task Achievement
To improve task achievement, ensure you address all parts of the prompt in detail. It might help to brainstorm and outline key points before writing to ensure nothing is missed. Although you've covered the essential information, adding more specific details or personal touches could enhance the response.
Coherence & Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, varying sentence structure and using a wider range of linking words can improve the flow of ideas. Consider practicing with transitional phrases that show contrast, cause and effect, or sequence to enrich your writing.
Task Achievement
A more detailed exploration of how the friend could utilize the home or nearby amenities might add depth to your response, tying together the purpose of the stay with the logistical information provided. Incorporating such elements can elevate your task response further.
General Advice
Checking for occasional spelling and grammar errors can also improve the overall quality of the letter. Even minor errors can distract the reader from the message you're trying to convey.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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