The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table displays

that

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how many mobile

phone

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phones

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sold

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5 different

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between 2006 and 2012.

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, the company of Nokia, Ericsson and Motorola decrease over the given time period ,

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Samaung

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and Apple grow dramatically. It can be seen that Motorola is the most

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drop mobile phone company , which from 210 million to 28

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during a 7 year-period time. Ericsson started at 74

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sale

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in 2006

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and dropped sharply to 28

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millions

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in 2012. The

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trend of Nokia remained

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345millions

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345 million

in 2006 to 335

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in 2012 with fluctuation during the given time period.

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contrary

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, Apple have a

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increase from single digit(2.3

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) to 135.8

sale

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million in 2012,

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Samsung got

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sale

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increase from 117

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millions

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to 396.5

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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, sale with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

134 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

annual sales
fluctuations
market saturation
technological advancements
consumer trends
brand dominance
growth trajectory
market share
innovations
peak sales
decline
stagnate
proliferate
exponential growth
market dynamics
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