The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays
that
how many mobile Correct word choice
apply
phone
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phones
sold
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were sold
from
5 different Change preposition
by
company
between 2006 and 2012. Fix the agreement mistake
companies
Overall
, the company of Nokia, Ericsson and Motorola decrease over the given time period , however
, Samaung
and Apple grow dramatically.
It can be seen that Motorola is the most Correct your spelling
Samsung
significate
drop mobile phone company , which from 210 million to 28 Correct your spelling
significant
millions
during a 7 year-period time. Ericsson started at 74 Change to singular
million
mllions
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million
millions
sale
in 2006 Fix the agreement mistake
sales
,
and dropped sharply to 28 Remove the comma
apply
millions
in 2012. The Change to singular
million
sale
trend of Nokia remained unchange
from Correct your spelling
unchanged
345millions
in 2006 to 335 Correct your spelling
345 million
millions
in 2012 with fluctuation during the given time period.
Change to singular
million
In
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On
contrary
, Apple have a Correct article usage
the contrary
noticable
increase from single digit(2.3 Correct your spelling
noticeable
millions
) to 135.8 Change to singular
million
sale
million in 2012, which
Samsung got Correct word choice
while
tiple
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a total
sale
increase from 117 Fix the agreement mistake
sales
millions
to 396.5 Change to singular
million
millions
.Change to singular
million
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