the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits
The diagram illustrates how much
coffee
and tea was bought by people in five cities
in the last
4 weeks and their drinking tendencies.
Overall
, the number of people who bought fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks was always the lowest proportion in all categories by far. In the opposite data, the figure for going to a coffeehouse for coffee
or tea was seen as highest in 4 cities
, except for Adelaide, where residents would love to buy instant coffee
than
going to a particular place or having fresh ones.
Regarding Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart, their preference for going to a cafe for Rephrase
rather than
coffee
or tea was over 60% highest ones
compared to the amount from two other Fix the agreement mistake
one
cities
Brisbane around 55%, and especially in Adelaide only under 50%. In addition
, there was a trend in buying instant coffee
in Adelaide at exactly 50%, which was still smaller than 5% in Brisbane and Hobart. The figures for the remaining cities
were about 46%.
Over 40% of people prefer to order fresh coffee
in two cities
Sydney and Melbourne, as opposed to only under 40% in Hobart and even under 35% in the two last
cities
.
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