THE TWO MAPS BELOW SHOW ROAD ACCESS GO A CITY HOSPITAL IN 2007 AND IN 2010.

THE TWO MAPS BELOW SHOW ROAD ACCESS GO A CITY HOSPITAL IN 2007 AND IN 2010.
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The diagram gives an overview of road access to a
city
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hospital before and after the construction of several facilities over a period of 13 years, starting from 2007.
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, the road access to a
city
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hospital has been significant development in terms of the facilities and road to the Hospital
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. In 2007, in the south corner of the
City
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hospital along the Hospital
Rd
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stress, there were six bus stops,
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in 2010, it was removed to the southwest next to the old location. Not only that, the new bus station was extended. To the right of the map, where there was a car park for staff and the public. Some time later, the staff car park still remains unchanged but the public car park has been separated and relocated to the northwest beside the
City
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Hospital. Turning to 2007, it's easy to see that the roundabouts haven’t been built, but moving towards two roundabouts appeared. It was a conjunction of the hospital with Ring
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and
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Rd
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, rd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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