The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The presented diagram illustrates some data about the process of making
plastic
bottles reusable once again. Overall
, it can be seen that there are 9 steps in this
cycle from throwing plastic
bottles to trash cans to the last
step, which is producing various products from plastic
.
Initially
, the plastic
bottle is dropped into the trash can. After that, all of the rubbish is poured into the truck. The following step is
to separate the sorts of plastics from each other in the recycling centre. After being compressed into blocks, the compressed plastics are then
crushed and poured into the water. Once plastic
pellets have been produced by some equipment, the pellets are then
heated to form raw material. After which, the raw materials are prepared in order to be them in other products. Finally
, many products and goods are produced for individuals to buy.
In conclusion, this
process can help us to keep our environment clean. Furthermore
, it can prevent our earth from disturbing the ecological balance. Also
, many raw petrochemical substances are kept for the next generation.Submitted by bardiasoheilinezhad71 on
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