The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict the 20 the
yrs
ago and the contemporary floor plans of a public Correct your spelling
years
library
.
Overall
, the library
has undergone significant changes in its layout and new facilities were introduced over the 20 yrs period while
abolishing some old facilities, however
the total Add the comma(s)
however,
bulding
Correct your spelling
building
area
has been remained
unchanged.
In detail,Change to the active voice
remained
entrance
of the Add an article
the entrance
library
remain
unchanged ,and upon entering previous seating Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
area
with tables and chairs has been removed to creat
Correct your spelling
create
a
open Change the article
an
area
at
the middle of the Change preposition
in
presentday
Correct your spelling
modern
library
. Furthermore
, previous
reading Correct article usage
the previous
room
situated left to the entrance
has changed to a computer room
at present and enquiry
desk Correct article usage
the enquiry
opposit
to it and rightCorrect your spelling
opposite
Change preposition
of
entrance
was replaced with a cafe.
Other than that, the previous room
at the left far side of the entrance
, for CDs, videos and computer games has changed significantly a to kids
Change noun form
kids'
kid's
area
with larger room
space and sofas for the story telling
events ,and Correct your spelling
storytelling
further
with children's friction
books. Correct your spelling
fiction
Similarly
, a
Correct article usage
apply
self service
machines can be seen with the Add a hyphen
self-service
contrmporary
plan just adjacent to the cafe at Correct your spelling
contemporary
right
to the Correct article usage
the right
entrance
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, area, entrance, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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