The chart below shows the proporsional of Energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The chart below shows the proporsional of Energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
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The given charts illustrate the changes in the amount of energy which came from different resources on the two dates, 1985 and 2003.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in both years, Oil became the main resource to produce electricity
while
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other renewable energy sources were the least ranked in the chart. Looking in more detail at the two resources that witnessed an increase, the largest growth was seen in coal.
This
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source registered a 14% from 8% in 1985 to 22% in 2003. The other resource, natural gas,
also
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experienced a rise in the proportion of energy produced, albeit not as great as nuclear. It accounted increase of 10% for over almost 20 years.
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, hydro was the only category that remained constant in both years at 4%.
In contrast
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, oil and nuclear experienced a decline in their amount of electricity production figures. The greatest decrease was observed in Nuclear with 14% from 22% to 8% over the period.
This
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was followed closely by oil with a 13% drop from 52% at the start of the tracking period to 39%
at the end
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.
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, it can be seen that there was a rise as regards another category that did not fall into the category mentioned before by 4% in 2003.
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