The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates data on the number of visitors to UK museums in both the winter and summer of the year 2003.
Overall
, visitors in the summer are wildly higher than in the other season
in the graph, Fix the agreement mistake
seasons
while
the more popular season
has activity throughout the day
compared to the cold season
, while
the middle of the day
sees most of the people entering in both seasons.
Firstly
, the hot season
has a dramatic rise from the early hours to reach its peak at around noon with more than 1400 people, however
, it also
witnesses a steep decline all the way to the end of the day
.
Furthermore
, the snow season
has a rise in the early day
before going relatively steady and then
rises again to its highest point of around 600 visitors at the 12 hour but then
the numbers collapse to about zero around hour 15 and stay that way for the rest of the day
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