There is increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for couples who decide to do this.
It has been seen, that the number of young married
couples
around the world has increased who decide to be childless. off course, it benefits them as they can be more focused towards their career and have more time
for themselves in life
. However
, they cannot fit in peer groups who have kids
and also
there will be no one
present to take care of them in their old age.
The main benefit to decide
have no Add the particle
decide to
kids
is, that young couples
can concentrate on their goals and careers. If their time
is consumed by children
take
care they cannot be dedicated to their work which takes them back from their work priorities. Verb problem
apply
For instance
, One
pregnant woman has to go on maternity leave in her pregnancy to recover herself. Sometimes if the situation is critical day off from work could be for a year, and it absolutely takes their job responsibilities behind then
expectations. Secondly
, Husband-wife has
more Correct subject-verb agreement
have
opportunity
to spend Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
time
with each other if they do have not any responsibility for their offspring, they can flourish their relationship by travelling more which eventually makes them dedicated and responsible for each other.
On the other hand
, the drawbacks of remaining childless cannot be ignored as they cannot see themselves as equal to their friends who have children
because they do not fit themselves in their company. Any kid's family prefer to spend time
with those only who have children
. For example
, there are a number of events that are only organised for families with kids
. Couples
who have no children
are ignored in those events.
Apart from that, in old age , there will be no one
from their family who can support them if they don't have any child, Suppose, if the wife dies early then
for husband no
Verb problem
is
one
will be left to take care therefore
downside should always consider
before making decisions in Add a missing verb
be consider
life
.
In conclusion, although
it is true that adult couples
feel more loving and targetted for their career without having kids
in their life
, but demerits of the decision make them alone in their mature life
and also
friend circle does not support much to them.Submitted by gsgaganmann on
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