The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The presented graph depicts the cloning process between
sheep
embryos. The process involves three female
sheeps
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sheep
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, which are represented by
sheep
A,
B
and C. As can be perceived, two major steps are carried out including important components extraction and fusion with the subsequent stages.
Initially
, either body
and
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egg cells as necessary elements from two different female
sheeps
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sheep
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, which are
sheep
A and
B
respectively, are being taken. DNA which brings genetic information, is
then
extracted from the A
sheep
;
while
for the
B
,
nucleus
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is transplanted from the previous egg cell. Coming to the second main step which is artificial fertilization, the DNA from
sheep
A with the egg cell from
sheep
B
are
then
fused, before it develops becoming morula, blastula, gastrula and embryo.
Subsequently
, the embryo is relocated to and
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nurtured in the uterus of
sheep
C as the foster mother. Once the earlier stage is done successfully, ultimately, the newborn lamb as the product is
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born as a clone of
sheep
A.
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