2.You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, oSay how you found out about the plans oExplain what problems your neighbourhood will face oSuggest some possible solutions to those problems.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with your plan which is to build a new
airport
in our
neighborhood
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. I was talking to some of my neighbors several days ago and they informed me there will be a new construction in our area which will be an
airport
.
Moreover
, I was noticed through
newspaper
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about it.
Therefore
, I realized that
this
would not be a
rumor
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. I want to explain that constructing
this
airport
will definitely
causes
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dangerous issues including
extremely
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noise pollution and inappropriate air quality
on
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our
neighborhood
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. So, suffering from these problems will lead to either premature death or mental disorders. Given these circumstances, I am asking you to change the location of your construction and relocate it to at least two miles away from our area. By relocating the
airport
these enormous issues for our neighborhood will not occur. Thank you for your reconsideration in advance. Yours sincerely, Khashayar Partovi
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Task Achievement
Try to be more specific with your arguments. For instance, instead of simply stating 'extremely noise pollution,' explain how the noise might affect the daily lives and health of the residents.
Task Achievement
Include data or references to strengthen your arguments. This might be in the form of studies showing the negative impacts of airports near residential areas.
Coherence & Cohesion
Work on linking your ideas more smoothly to improve the flow of your writing. Transition words or phrases can help make the progression from one argument to the next clearer.
Task Achievement
Consider expanding on your possible solutions by offering more detailed alternatives or additional measures to minimize the impact of the airport construction.
General Writing
Be cautious with spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'causes' should be 'cause'). These can distract from the message you are trying to convey.
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