the diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather
The given
inforaphic
illustrates details about how leather products are manufactured.
Correct your spelling
infographic
infographics
Overall
, it can be seen that there are 11 steps involved in the process , commencing with drying animal skins
and culminating with used goods ready for distributing
to wholesalers for consumption.
At the initial stage, the animal Replace the word
distribution
skins
are dried under the Sun before being moved into factory
.In Correct article usage
the factory
this
factory , there are
some chemical Change the verb form
is
Fix the agreement mistake
processes
process
as these Fix the agreement mistake
processes
skins
are washed in water Wrong verb form
combined
combining
with lime ,and Wrong verb form
combined
then
Verb problem
apply
being
soaked in lime.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Subsequently
, the leathers are flattend
by physical machines, prior to being soaked again in tannin. After that, these Correct your spelling
flattened
skins
are polished by wheels. Followed
Wrong verb form
Following
this
step is the delivering the leathers to factory
where they are used to produce a variety of completed products Add an article
the factory
a factory
such
as shoes, handbags and balls. The process terminates when these new commodities are willing to be sold in market
to consumersAdd an article
the market
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