The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015.

The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015.
The map illustrates the new model conversion of the University campus in 2015, that has been previously made in 2005.
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, there are five buildings including two student accommodations, facilities, science and art buildings. The two largest ones that can be observed would be
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one
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of
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the student house and shop
area
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,
also
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, the offices.They are divided by
one
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main roadway.
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, on the right side of the street, three buildings are present. The art and the shopping
area
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that is
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separated by a lake and both are adjacent to the main street with the closer
one
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being the art house.
WhileSleeping
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While sleeping
and relaxation rooms are slightly far behind and to the right side of a small road
making
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giving
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in front of it the view of the swimming
area
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.
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to, trees that are scattered all over the
area
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.
Secondly
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, on the left side of the street, two main houses are built. First is the science building facing the highway and the other is meant for students to live there which appears quite the largest
one
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.
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, they are separated by small trees.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words one, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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