The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015.
The map illustrates the new model conversion of the University campus in 2015, that has been previously made in 2005.
Overall
, there are five buildings including two student accommodations, facilities, science and art buildings. The two largest ones that can be observed would be one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
the student house and shop Change preposition
apply
area
, also
, the offices.They are divided by one
main roadway.
Firstly
, on the right side of the street, three buildings are present. The art and the shopping area
that is
separated by a lake and both are adjacent to the main street with the closer one
being the art house. WhileSleeping
and relaxation rooms are slightly far behind and to the right side of a small road Correct your spelling
While sleeping
making
in front of it the view of the swimming Verb problem
giving
area
. In addition
to, trees that are scattered all over the area
.
Secondly
, on the left side of the street, two main houses are built. First is the science building facing the highway and the other is meant for students to live there which appears quite the largest one
. Moreover
, they are separated by small trees.Submitted by Abdulrahimmohamudali on
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