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the table below gives information on consumer spending on differnet items in five different countries in 2002.

the table below gives information on consumer spending on differnet items in five different countries in 2002.
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The table provides information about a comparison of how much people spent their money on different items in five
countries
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 in 2002.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the most purchased item among 5
countries
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 was held by Food/Drink/Tobacco, followed by Clothing/Footwear at the second. Leisure/Education items show the lowest figure on consumer spending. In terms of the two most purchased items, Turkey recorded the highest
percentage
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 for Food/Drink/Tobacco accounting for 32.14%. Ireland stood in second position with 28.91% and the other three
countries
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 show a small number of consumer spending with Spain at 18.80% and Italy and Spain share almost the same
percentage
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 which is 16.36% and 15.77% respectively. Spain consumers are the top on spending on Clothing/Footwear with 9.00%
while
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 the other three
countries
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 figured almost the same number each other and on average at 6.00%. Leisure/Education shows the lowest consumer spending
percentage
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, even though the highest
percentage
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 was in Turkey at 4.35% still under the lowest
percentage
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 of Clothing/Footwear in Sweden.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • significant
  • analysis
  • break down
  • speculate
  • cultural factors
  • economic factors
  • social factors
  • comparison and contrast
  • evolve
  • impact
  • economy
  • society
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