the table below gives information on consumer spending on differnet items in five different countries in 2002.
The diagram illustrates how much people consumed different items in Spain, Ireland, Sweden, and
Turkey
in 2002.
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Overall
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Turkey
was the countries got the most remarkable data in total,
except for Clothing/footwear. Use synonyms
However
, there was a similar proportion between all ones compared, which all five regions Linking Words
also
mostly spent on food/drink/tobacco, Linking Words
then
next to clothing/footwear, Linking Words
finally
Leisure education occupied the lowest one.
The number of consumption of food/Drink/Tobacco from Ireland and Linking Words
Turkey
is the highest data at around 30%, which almost doubled with Italy, Sweden, and Spain at around 15%-18% . Use synonyms
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While
, the figure for clothing/footwear was seen Correct your spelling
Meanwhile
the
highest in Italy which got exactly 9% in 2002, compared to
the remaining countries, which were at about 5%-6%.
Over 4% in Leisure/Education from Change preposition
as the
Turkey
, which was roughly 1% higher than Italy and Sweden, Use synonyms
which
specifically at 3.20% and 3.22% in that order. And better than 2% with 2.21% and 1.98% from Ireland and Spain respectively.Correct pronoun usage
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