the number of flights has increased. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

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countries for several reasons. In our growing international

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more and more

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have the opportunity to work all around the globe and

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to the increasing

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a great and fast way for

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to

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easy access to all parts of the world and

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global cooperation, it is followed by many disadvantages, especially for the environment. These disadvantages

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a negative impact on our lives and

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future planet we live on and

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why the drawbacks exceed the

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globalization

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can now by

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both short and long distances without any bigger circumstances. The

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of the growing

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of

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are that

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all around the world now have the chance to

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to different destinations and experience

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various numbers of cultures.

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international cooperation increases when

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become more common, where job opportunities

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free in different countries. But even though the growing

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of

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has some

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, the drawbacks will have bigger consequences. The increasing quantity of

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rides impacts the environment in many various ways, and one thing they have in common is that all the consequences are negative. Airplanes emit a high amount of carbon emissions which contributes to climate change and problems regarding global warming. The growing popularity

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long distance

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flights

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contributes to the reason why our earth keeps getting warmer each year, which is mainly because of the easy asset and the decreasing price

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flight tickets. Many scientists have already warned us about what will happen if we continue to fly

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speed, which will be horrible results. In conclusion,

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the increase in the

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of

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undoubtedly offers numerous

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in terms of global connectivity and

cultrual

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cultural

exchange, it cannot be denied that the drawbacks,

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concerning environmental degradation and climate change, outweigh these advantages. It is necessary that we seek sustainable solutions to mitigate these adverse

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of air

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on our planet.