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The graph and chart provide information on the daily average maximum and minimum temperatures and the average number of days with rainfall in two cities in Australia

The graph and chart provide information on the daily average maximum and minimum temperatures and the average number of days with rainfall in two cities in Australia
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The line graph provides information about the average
temperatures
 of two cities on a daily basis. The bar chart indicates the how many
days
 per month that rain falls in the same cities.
Overall
, the average
temperatures
 drop in both cities between February and July.
In addition
,
Brisbane
 generally has more
days
 with rain, but the figures in
Canberra
 surpass between June and October. At
first,
the average
temperatures
 in both places stand at around 27 degrees in January and decline gradually until they reach the lowest levels in July.
Subsequently
, the figures rise to end at the same level as those at the beginning.
However
, the average
temperatures
 in
Brisbane
 remain higher than those in
Canberra
 throughout the year,
while
Canberra
's have more dramatic changes. The number of
days
 with rain in
Brisbane
 fluctuated more drastically throughout the year compared to
Canberra
, especially between October and May, ranging from 8 to 14
days
 per month. The figures stay constant at 7
days
 between June and September.
In contrast
, the numbers for
Canberra
 seem less versatile, ranging from 7 to 10
days
 per month.
Canberra
 has fewer
days
 with rainfall than
Brisbane
, except for the period from June to October.
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