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The chart below gives information on the precentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words

The chart below gives information on the precentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words
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The chart below represents percentages of British individuals giving money to charity by
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 range between 1990 and 2010.
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,it is evident that the biggest amount of giving money to charity was the
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 between 36-50 years. To commence with the youngest
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group
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, which was 18-25 years old showed the lowest numbers,
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 as almost 17% for 1990 and 6% for 2010, respectively.
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, the
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group
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 between 26-35 showed an uptrend , which comprised 31% for 1990 and 23% for 2010,
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. When it comes to the biggest percentages, which were
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group
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 between 36-50, which made up about 42% for 1990 and 34% for 2010.
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,the same trend illustrates the
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 between 51-65, which accounted for 35% in 1990 and 37% in 2010.
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 but not least was the
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group
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 65+, which made up a bit more than 35% for 1990 and 35% for 2010,respectively. It may be concluded from the chart that the
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group
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 between 36-65 showed the biggest percentages of giving money to charity in the UK.
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